RE: The Dying Body Chronicles 21: The hunt for mother
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Hello @warpedpoetic,
When I started to read your story today my eyes were heavy with a drowsiness. Atari's loss of consciousness and journey to the nether (other) world almost blended with my drifting awareness. The story pulled me out.
Sometimes your stories do not not have a clearly defined arc, or characters. They are beautiful and memorable but the emphasis is not on a literal, linear narrative. In this instance you provide character and arc and still present a nebulous sense of reality.
The story deals with death, but it is beautiful. Your imagery, as always, is startling.
Thank you for sharing this with the community. I hope you are remembering to read and comment on the work of other Ink Well authors.
Hope you are peaceful and well. Please do keep writing.
Thank you very much as always.