RE: The Dying Body Chronicles 21: The hunt for mother

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Hello @warpedpoetic,
When I started to read your story today my eyes were heavy with a drowsiness. Atari's loss of consciousness and journey to the nether (other) world almost blended with my drifting awareness. The story pulled me out.

Sometimes your stories do not not have a clearly defined arc, or characters. They are beautiful and memorable but the emphasis is not on a literal, linear narrative. In this instance you provide character and arc and still present a nebulous sense of reality.

The story deals with death, but it is beautiful. Your imagery, as always, is startling.

Thank you for sharing this with the community. I hope you are remembering to read and comment on the work of other Ink Well authors.

Hope you are peaceful and well. Please do keep writing.



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