The Writing of a song.

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It is good to be Creative.

Have you ever written a song?

Today I want to share a song I wrote .
This song is Called "Move It".
I wanted to write a song about moving your energy when you feel stuck and this is what came out.
Here are the words.

Move It.

I want to see you in your wholeness.
I want to move right through my coldness
Though my mind Keeps on wandering away.

I'm going to keep my feelings flowing,
Until the peace it keeps on growing.
Though my mind keeps on wandering away.

Move it, you gotta move it.
Move it, You gotta move it.
though my heart keeps breaking away.

Mother your light shines right through me.
I want your answers to come to me.
Live it up and get it out,
take the things you want to shout and Move it.
You Gotta move it.

I sing my heart, I want to say I love you all in every way, you move me.
Though my heart keeps on wandering away.
I want to see you in your wholeness.
I want to move right through my coldness.

You can listen to the song here.

Tell me what you think.



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Wow this sounds really amazing!! I thought you were sharing just the text and I was looking forward to hear the song and then I saw you posted it as well 💓 great song and lyrics, Thank you for sharing

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Thanks for listening. I appreciate the comment.
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That actually sounds much better than I expected when just reading the lyrics, is it okay to add it to one of my upcoming Midnight Gems articles? I really like the piece starting at 2:50 btw very well done.

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Thanks for the comment . Yes please add me . thanks for listening.
I look forward to seeing your post.
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@alente it takes something extra special to be a poet, and I admire all who are like you, because I have tried it out, it takes going deep into a special place to bring out a piece like this. And I hope it will inspires many of us stuck many a time to gather as much energy as needed and get moving. Thanks.

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Thank you for listening and leaving a comment. I really appreciate your feedback.
!CTP

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Great song. I love the music and the words. Thanks for sharing on ListNerds.

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Thanks for listening. I appreciate it.
!CTP

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Oh, this is a whole vibe, and you have a nice baritone growl element in your voice we don't hear often nowadays! Very nice!

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Thank you. I am glad you appreciate it. Thanks for the listen!
!CTP

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It's telling me that the video isn't available. But based on the lyrics I can relate to the lyrics. Sometimes we have that war between what we know is the best thing to do and what we feel like doing. Sometimes our rational part goes through just to push us through.

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Try and refresh. That happened the first time I opened my post. It was fine after that. Thanks for checking me out

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