Only The Losses.. //( A Prompt Story)

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Life as it goes on in all the times, thick and thin, they say that its the spirit which makes sure that the good times of it goes away in a blink of an eye, and when it happens, life starts to lose the vitality of living, that its not the pain which binds the bitterness of existential happening ; its rather a sigh of pain and agony that is unmatched to anything and joys, happiness just start to become fruitless and hope dies soon.

Today, I am going to narrate a story which I took as a difficult view to capture, realistically a solid scene of which we see that everyday looking and penetrating the stories of the worlds creatures ; that in midst of hardships and watching people suffer -- just a single point made my day to write this story. I hope, you would like and also opine your views on that.

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Light goes on, light goes off. Frequently and uninterruptedly. A seemingly the shadow of a head went down and drooping in the coldness of winter and a state where the aura of disappointment cleary began to get more visible in his face. He stopped talking, stop claiming about the life that he had to pass in the day time, that no blaming of the God for providing a bad luck to him, that its his fate that has turned the wheels off and stairs taken away to climb out of hell. But, he seemed as silent and mood off.

Yesterday, he had a beautiful chance of getting to the place where his heart was,looking back at the time when he dreamt of getting to the zone, at the time his all vigilant presence and thoughts kept orienting the same dream and how to fulfill that in the short span of his time. He never looked on that, and believed in failing to attain that ; he didnt have any regrets rather he was full of strength ; a sense of maturity which enabled him to carry on through tough times.

The journey of his life started at the time, right from the period of his birth. He wasnt that lucky enough to have a father to guide him along the way ; no educated parent to show him the right path and right duty to do at the tough moments of life. So, at the first parts of life,he had the problems of treading a smooth way ; when it was the time of enjoyment and finding the meaning of life ; he searched for to see what is in the darkest corner of his life.

Time flies on so quickly and the spring goes away and summer turns the calendar to start over again and all the material world only looks for the change, but the memories remain ever fresh and the boy grew up to be a young man. Now, he lost all his belonging, at his birth - he didnt have any opportunity to see his father, he only had his mother at his side, who at times could fan him after a long day of work at the garage, it was her cloth which made him feel relieved and forget all his pain in that time.

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When its a normal case, we all seem to have families around us, that when we do make any mistakes and face tremendous failures in life ; its them who abate the sores and the happiness comes when we get used to it. But, at the time of fighting alone - when nobody remains in ones side, its the agony that accompany one, the tragedies that keep haunting and the happiness turns out as the best part of pessimism nobody watches.

He reached at a point of life when he got everything necessary to live and survive in the cruel world he had faced right from the day one of his life,but he never wanted to see such reality coming forward. There are to be limit attached to the life and the pain that accompanies one, but when it comes to the matters of the successive losses ; breakdown of familial ties, long days of hardworking and sleepless nights to come to a painful ending, than surely life starts to lose the gear of living.

At the time of birth, he lost his father. His mother passed away in the day when he entered the working period of his life and now he still had one life, which he thought to accompany him in the long lonely journey of his life . But, even the fate of him decided to turn back his favour and it only looked for to escape the hands of him,he saw the love that he kept for his life. That in midst of long hard work and lists of pain which crippled him from time to time, now pushed him to the last.

At the time when he was alone and not a single dog to move with him, he had a chance to meet with a girl who came in his life as a blessing, as a mellowing rain in the scorching cruel lands of deserted sands, that when he was losing his mind and preparing to quit his life - its the time when he got onto the life where he met with the medicine who healed all his wounds one by one. The girl had a sweet voice and who could calm the disturbed mind in a blink of an eye. He could feel that easily.


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The relationship went so good at the first few years.He exchanged all his feelings to her and said that,I dont have anyone at this hours of life without you, I only have plans revolving you and if you part with me,I will have to tap the revolver to end all. The girl also could feel the same and he went on exchanging thoughts and passing little times at the end of the days break with her.

Every story has a beginning and like the truths of the world,the story also has the endline. It is true that when he got onto the stage of life,where he had to choose for the job and putting time on that, he could feel that more times on his job has provided more growth and which came as a great gift. But on the other hand, he saw that, she was losing interest to spare times with her. It was not the case that, he gave up looking after her, but the gaps in some period made lose the balance & rhythm of the relationship.

Right at the time when he was preparing for a grand invitation to her for the purpose that both of them are going to get married, its the time when he heard her saying that she has got a better person than him and he has lot more wealth than him. Hearing this, he didnt say any words and instead left the place and he found no point to argue with her. Sitting aimlessly at the room and looking at the mirror, he could see the broken face of him, a man who went through serious cruelties of fate & life.

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Sometimes its the fate which manipulates everything in the face of life, that when its nobody to blame for accept the nature and the luck, then life itself loses meaning and thats just what happened for him. Time flew on more, but he could only know that as the tick of every watch moves on,its the same for him also and he needs to do the same to his life.

Thanks For Reading.



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Oh! Such is an aimless life, Loosing a father from birth and also a mother who do all she can to make you a man and later passed away on the process of not being able to endure life, I really felt for him, because imagining what he is going through, can really make one heart to melt.

The girl on the other hand could not help matters at all, she should have stayed with him, because one day, he would someday become rich, he knows how, what to do and where to go about it in becoming a successful man, what he needs was a compassion, someone who could be his strength so that when he looks at her, she could be his strength.

But I am not going to judge her because the heart wants what it wants, I believe she has her own reasons for deciding to part ways with him.

Wow🥰, I can't stop to see myself going further and further in this great piece.

It is a nice one ❤️

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Hello, greetings.
Yeah, sometimes fate offers that to so many people and its not noteworthy to describe how they pass those days of struggle and helplessness.
Tragedy has its own way of speaking and I went with that. Thanks for the good read at the story and I really thank your view on that, I have felt a decent view here.

Have a nice day. 💖👍

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@asif7 you are welcome 🥰
It was a good read I had and I enjoyed it a lot.
Have a great day ahead too🤗

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Well, I must say, I had mixed emotions reading this. At first, I felt sad for him. He lost his father at birth, and his mother who took care of him, sacrifice all she had also died. Such a cruel world.

I felt happy when I read he met “the girl”. She should've stayed with him and maybe, just maybe, things would get better.

Fate can be very cruel; it doesn't care about your plans. Very sad.

This article brought back memories, sad ones. But I'm glad I read it.

Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks for a read at the story.
Yes, it is true and the story had its own way, which is the reality and the ingenuity of it that directed the plot to go in such a way.
I am glad that you have mixed emotions here, it means you are stronger in your perceptions ; things that go right with the reactions.

Be blessed., 👍

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