RE: Becoming something more

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So many memorable lines here!
This especially speaks to me:

I'd call you
Eternal but you're finite as
Laughter, two hands holding,
Music, two songs dancing.

And I, "simple as sin" - it's all musical as well as memorable.



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Thank you so much. This from you means a lot. Thank you.

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I was attempting as much to create the sense of music in the poem. It is a love poem which I am not good at.

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