Hive Open Mic Week 84- Dear Mama (Original)
Hello, Hive open Mic. I have been struggling to post all through yesterday cause of work and How exhausted I was But I am glad I finally got the chance.
I found out that the meaning of the theme was "En Honor y Amor a Ellas" -love and honor to them. So it thought for a while about who they are and why I have to hour them.
I wrote this song in a day and struggled to score it. Can you imagine? I wrote a song and it was hard to score it afterward.
I initially wanted to sing Supermarket by Ed Sheraan or Mama by Boys II Men but non of them expressed just exactly what I wanted.
I remember learning that the 4th, 5th, and the 1st chords sounded nice in a couple of songs I have played so I wanted to see If I could make a song out of it.
The lyrics are really my effort in trying to paint a picture of who my mom is. While Ed Sheeran's song was a song I could and wanted to score...My mother is alive and it didn't feel right.
I'm also finding my voice in music and it's a little Caribbean...@dmillz let me know what you think about this.
@dreemsteem
@fernanblog
@jaydr
@littlebeatle
I'd love to hear your thoughts.
Lyrics
I remember one of those Decembers
I was so young I doubt you would remember
Oh, it was so cold
When I fell down and hurt my shoulders
You thought me sometimes the pain would mold us
Oh, it was so cold
It happens every day
You have to keep moving in every way
It happens every day
You have to keep moving in every way
Dear mama, I've gotten older
Dear mama, I'm getting stronger.
You said it happens every day
You have to keep moving in every way
I was moving on the road on a lonely night
then a bomboclat are want to come take up me life
And oh, it was so cold
The whole scene just seemed like a movie
Felt a cold rush move right through me
oh, it was so cold
It happens every day
You have to keep moving in every way
It happens every day
You have to keep moving in every way
Dear mama, I've gotten older
Dear mama, I'm getting stronger.
Hola, micrófono abierto de Hive. Estuve luchando para publicar todo el día de ayer debido al trabajo y lo agotado que estaba. Pero me alegro de haber finalmente tenido la oportunidad.
Descubrí que el significado del tema era "En Honor y Amor a Ellas", amor y honor para ellos. Así que pensó durante un rato en quiénes son y por qué tengo que controlarlos.
Escribí esta canción en un día y luché por componerla. ¿Puedes imaginar? Escribí una canción y fue difícil componerla después.
Inicialmente quería cantar Supermarket de Ed Sheraan o Mama de Boys II Men, pero ninguno de ellos expresó exactamente lo que quería.
Recuerdo haber aprendido que los acordes 4th, 5th y 1st sonaban bien en un par de canciones que había tocado, así que quería ver si podía hacer una canción con ellos.
La letra es realmente mi esfuerzo para tratar de pintar una imagen de quién es mi mamá. Si bien la canción de Ed Sheeran era una canción que podía y quería componer ... Mi madre está viva y no se sentía bien.
También encuentro mi voz en la música y es un poco caribeño ... @ dmillz déjame saber lo que piensas sobre esto.
@dreemsteem
@fernanblog
@jaydr
@pequeños
Me encantaría escuchar tus pensamientos.
Letra
Recuerdo uno de esos diciembres
Era tan joven que dudo que te acuerdes
Oh, estaba tan frio
Cuando me caí y me lastimé los hombros
Pensaste que a veces el dolor nos moldearía
Oh, estaba tan frio
Pasa todos los dias
Tienes que seguir moviéndote en todos los sentidos
Pasa todos los dias
Tienes que seguir moviéndote en todos los sentidos
Querida mamá, me he hecho mayor
Querida mamá, me estoy volviendo más fuerte.
Dijiste que pasa todos los días
Tienes que seguir moviéndote en todos los sentidos
Me estaba moviendo por la carretera en una noche solitaria
entonces un bomboclat quiere venir a tomarme la vida
Y oh, estaba tan frio
Toda la escena parecía una película
Sentí una ráfaga de frío que me atravesaba
oh, estaba tan frio
Pasa todos los dias
Tienes que seguir moviéndote en todos los sentidos
Pasa todos los dias
Tienes que seguir moviéndote en todos los sentidos
Querida mamá, me he hecho mayor
Querida mamá, me estoy volviendo más fuerte.
▶️ 3Speak
Bro your song is great, I liked it a lot, it has a good vibe and feeling, the bad thing is that I couldn't listen to it completely 😢, something happens with the video that freezes the image and there is no sound 🤔, did you check it before uploading it? leaving that aside I was enjoying the song a lot, is it your first composition? has a tropical vibe that is right Bro 🙌😃❤️
PS: how cool that you and now @jaydr are making your entries with some spanish, well done 👊😎🔥🎙️🎹🎶🎄🌟🍻
Oh mehn...I noticed it took a long time for it upload on 3speaks...
It was fine when I made it...I'll check it out
It happened to me yesterday that the video uploaded well, but the last seconds the image freezes with sound, I have seen another video that happened the same as yours, it must be 3speak server failure 🤔
I didn't know He was speaking spanish too...Lets go!!! 💪🏾💪🏾🤘🏽🤘🏽
Vamos mi Amigo 👊😎🔥🌟🍻
Sí!!💪🏾💪🏾
hehe..
I wish I had known hive while I was learning Spanish, lost the vibe cause the use was less, dont worry, I promise to pick it back up.
Don't worry hehe just that plus the fact that in their videos they speak a little bit of Spanish, makes the video more attractive and hooks more people, bien hecho mi querido amigo 🙌😃🔥🍻🌟❤️
Muchas Gracias, mi amigo😅
@mipiano my entry was ruined 💔😥
What do I do?
Ohhhhh 🙁
If you still have the video, upload it to YouTube and embed into this post. Don't publish again the same post!!! just embed a YouTube uploaded video into this post , ok? The parts I can listen to are cool 😎
Alright...I'll get right to it
yes, if you can it would be good... asap :))
YES!!! NOw it works perfectly @ebingo ! Huh, great all now. Super nice song you wrote in honour of your mom 💚 I hope you showed her, if not, please, share this song with her! She will be happy! I would be if my son would write something like this for me ;)
I will😁😁 I'm going home next weekend...been 6 months I last saw her.
Thanks for the guidance...My hive mom😉
Have a lovely weekend.
EBINGO!!!! I already received a few nicknames here hahaha , good and not so good ones hahaha, but this is a special one, your hive mom???? 😇
Olé!
🤘🏽🤘🏽❤❤❤
I'll keep the good ones coming
😁 👏👏
Lol...I have a score board now😅😅😅
This is a beautiful song @ebingo
I feel late to the party, but music never sleeps
This should be sung to your mum,
they deserve all the love and honor.
Parents are golden.
I will bro...
I might be home next weekend for my dad's birthday so I'll make sure she hears it.
Thanks for showing up....I hope you didn't feel dragged in...I honestly wanted people's oppions about my work.
Na, It s totally okay, I had a busy day yesterday.. Could have replied earlier.
How the posting dey go na...hope sey them no pack call give you?
Not posting.
That life don pass..😂
I was off, but had to do some town runs.
Ah ah, you are done?
Been done since Aug.
Wow...congratulations bro!! So what's next?
Japa?
Interim MO.. Japa view oo..🙏🏽
Great work my friend! Make me miss my mom already. 500 miles away. It made me feel emotional. I love the pacing and your voice in this song. Thank you for sharing your original here as the community needs more like this. I posted my original yesterday too having an emotional day as well. I love how we are wired with music. And good music comes from true authentic life expriences. Cheers! 😊
Nice...I'll check out yours.
I love your taste of music...If I ever start working on an album you are part of my critic team for sure.
Brother your song is very catchy, it is cheerful and the lyrics are of total enjoyment, I love it, many things come to my mind with your song 😁 I wish there was a drummer and a trumpet player that we knew to do something epic with this song 👊😎🔥🎙️🎹🎶❤️🌟🎄🍻
Wow that's amazing song.. by the way I think I need to learn to sing with you my friend 😊
Thanks bro!!. I really appreciate the comment. I have a small discord channel I am building for collaborations between artists on Hive. Would you like to join?
Yes ! I really want to join bro
https://discord.gg/NW2fZkZk