Hive open mic week 92 Love of my life (Original)

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When I saw the theme for the week, I saw more of a challenge. I have always wanted to write a song about love and the love of my life and how love has felt from my experience.

I have had beautiful moments that almost drive me to tears whenever I think about them. But I am alone now, and I always feel that's how the story always ends as adults...we always end up alone...

But it depends where you start the story from. One might even say we always end up with people...the right ones.

The song

The first two verses are a plea and begin the song. I chose to start it with a familiar chord but I wanted to use it differently so I chose to use the C7th chord and play it on key G where I could run downscale to a sad Major...Dmaj acting as the 5th.

The art

Hint, it's a line drawing and some color of me with a bottle of body cream. But don't let me interpret it for you...let me know what you think?

Lyrics

Hol' my hand
Let me tell you my whole plan

Me and you we more than friends
We more than, more than friends.

If you give me chance to
I will make your dreams true
Nobody go chance you
Girl you know my plans true
Girl you know my plans true
Girl you know my plans true

You are the lo lo lo lo lo love
You are the lo lo lo lo lo love
You are the lo lo lo lo lo love
Say yes, Say yes

I hit the low with the lo lo love of my life
I hit the low with the lo lo love of my life
I hit the low with the lo lo love of my life

At the end of the day
You're not mine anyway
You're mine and that's ok
But we'll meet again and fix this pain
Maybe then and only then you'll be the

You are the lo lo lo lo lo love
You are the lo lo lo lo lo love
You are the lo lo lo lo lo love
Say yes, Say yes

I hit the low with the lo lo love of my life
I hit the low with the lo lo love of my life
I hit the low with the lo lo love of my life


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Original song!! Nice one @ebingo 👏
Dont know if we always end up alone as adults... there are people that find the other half. There are people that just live with another one by the wrong choice. There are people that try to make the best and struggle... it would be maybe the best to be alone. Love is also a choice we make and work on it not to fade away. Being in the love phase is not lasting forever and if there are more bounds between people, love will develop :) I hope you can find a person you can be happy with and have that awesome life journey with the love of your life :)

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Argh...its life and it multitude of paths...I still hope I make the best of it.

And you are very right about it developing...but that lovey dovey phase really is beautiful right before reality sets in and you start noticing flaws and bits of imperfection you will struggle to deal with.

I hope I find that person too...I hope we never have question if we were right for each other...we just know it.

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Nice post and very creative I mean the music as well

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Thank you...It took some time to put together

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I really got carried away by your song bro!
I like the LO LO LO LO LOVE section it's so cool 😎👍🎶🍻💯

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Lol...thanks...I wanted it to be catchy

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Yes and it's true that your songs are catchy bro ! 😎🎶👍🔥🍻

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Take this to the studio bro!!!! Has a great sound!!! The progression on the keyboard is lovely !!! Can I get the chord progression?

I’ll like to do a cover of this

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Thanks mehn...I'm glad you liked it that much

The chords are

Cmaj 7th Dmaj Amin and Gmaj

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Being alone is also love of life Bro, after living love disappointments we learn to value loneliness more and that comforts us to continue betting on love, when we least expect it we will not be so alone hehehehe.

What you did was a tremendous lo-fi song, I liked it bro, it's very relaxing and you can someday do something wonderful with it, I'm proud of you bro, it will sound exaggerated sometimes but when I believe in people I know they have so many things to show the world that when they do it is something so beautiful and unique that it excites....

I always enjoy your songs and more of your original songs, the previous one you did for your mom was great and this one is very cool I congratulate you Bro, keep on like this 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....

🙌😀🔥🎙️🎹🎶❤️🌟🍻💥💫💯

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(Edited)

What a beautiful original song you have here...
I really wonder...
How many songs have you written so far?

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This really is amazingly beautiful.

I sincerely wanna thank you for taking out time to record this beautiful song.

It's my pleasure meeting you once more

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