The Long Journey Home

It was a Friday in Lagos City, and I was on my way home after a long day at work. I was glad it was the weekend since I would spend most of Saturday morning sleeping while my siblings did the housework. The distance from my house to my work is so far, which means I would be sitting in the bus for a very long hour. I already have my phone and headset charged for the journey.

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I got to the bus stop and saw the bus that would take me home, calling it Passanger. In Lagos City, if you aren’t quick to enter a bus, the bus seat will be occupied in no time, and you would have to wait for another bus to come, which takes longer than an egg to get boiled. I rushed towards the bus and sat on time; in no time, the bus was filled up, and we were on my way home.

I sat close to the door and plugged in my headset so I could catch up on the movie I couldn’t finish last night, but I couldn’t because the bus kept getting into the pothole. The road was so bad I couldn’t enjoy the movie; I had no choice but to listen to music. After sitting for an hour on the road, we got struck by a heavy traffic jam, and there was nothing we could do we already paid the fee for the journey. The driver asked if he could pass through the Odogunyan neighborhood, and we all kicked against it.

We were in the traffic for another 30 minutes without moving, and then the driver asked again, "The Ododunyan neighborhood is faster and could connect us at the other side of the road", at the time there was scary silence in the bus because no one wanted to go through that neighborhood. I didn't say anything, but I could tell the thought of the other person beside me, more like a feeling of camaraderie. That neighborhood is a dangerous place to be at night, and it was already 9 p.m. A lot of bad stories have been said about that place, and I wouldn’t risk it just to confirm the stories. The driver asked again, and a woman said, "It's not like we don’t want to pass, but it is saved to pass there?" and that was when everyone started saying their minds, we were in one accord with the woman. Words like "I don’t like that road; the people there are not good; is it safe?" everyone kicked against it, but due to the heavy traffic, we all gave in and decided to take that routine.

I removed my headset, disconnected it, and hid it inside my bag, including my phone and wallet. The driver was driving at a normal speed—not too far nor too slow. When we got to the heart of the neighborhood, we heard a loud gunshot, and the driver had to park in place without putting off the engine. We heard the second gunshot, and he made a U-turn and started driving back the way we came. We hadn’t gone far before we met another bus coming and alerting us to turn back. "The fight is coming from the way you are heading", the other driver said, we had to make another U-turn and drive at full speed.

I was shaking in my pants already, I didn’t even mind if we entered any potholes. We got to a place and met a lot of people on bikes. We slowed down, but when they saw our bus, they rode their bike over, and what I saw blew my mind. Some of them held guns and matches; they were pointing the gun at the bus driver, but he refused to come down or put off the engine. I was already soaked in sweat because I was sitting close to the door.

Without any notice, our driver drove through them with speed and turned at a place that would lead to the main road. We kept looking at our back to know if they were following us while we were shouting "drive, drive, drive faster." we got to the main road, the road was clear, but the driver was still driving at full speed. We got to a place filled with people, and he had to slow down and pack for us to get ourselves. I said, "I knew we shouldn’t pass this place," and everyone agreed. I could feel their fear and joy at the same time. It was like we were a family that just survived a terrorist attack. It was nothing but camaraderie.



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I appreciate how you builds suspense - from the initial resistance to passing through Odogunyan, to the ominous gunshots, to the armed men on bikes. You can feel the danger mounting. The descriptions are visceral, like the passengers sweating and shaking. The theme of camaraderie comes through clearly, as the passengers band together in their desire to avoid the shady area and later in their shared relief at surviving the ordeal. Their unified shouts to the driver - "drive, drive, drive faster" - neatly encapsulate that temporary bond in the face of peril. By the end, the author skillfully moves from recounting the tense events to reflecting on the passengers' communal mindset - "we were a family that just survived a terrorist attack." The experience vividly illustrates how shared hardship can create a fleeting but profound sense of connection and solidarity.

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Whaoo
This is the comment that got me today
This is the most beautiful comment I have seen on my write up seen the day I started writing on hive
Well describe which shows that you read it intoto
Thanks for this heart warming comment
🥹🥹🥹🥹

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Atleast you guys were safe and got home, there are certain risks that are not worth taking, neighborhoods like that should be avoided

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Honestly 😭😭
I wonder how people live in that neighborhood

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A thrilling story describing how people move from a state of individuality to a state of generational shock. You truly narrate a terrifying experience, @fashtioluwa . Thank you for this story.

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Oh my God that was a very scary experience, it's always good to be safe than sorry and good also to follow your instinct. But it's good that you guys were able to leave safely.

#dreemerforlife.

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Yeah
I can never forget that feelings
Till date I don’t like that neighborhood, I don’t even like visiting friends that lives there

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I don't think you can forget such an experience easily. But its good you are ok

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Omg!!! I was so damn terrified honestly lord!!
I was Imagining myself in this scenario and truth be told I would be definitely shaking and trembling. I feel the mutual consideration in the air cause everyone had one mind. Please where's this area of Lagos so that I can keep it in mind.??

Thanks for sharing this article...I learnt something new! #dreemerforlife #dreemport

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The area is in Ikorodu
odogunyan
that place ehnn
godforbid
I cant even visit friends that live there in day time with a settled mind

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