A Date At The Lantern Festival
Amber, help me go get some vegetables from the garden! Amber's mum, Becky called out from the kitchen.
Okay mum, right away! Amber answered running off excitedly
Hmm! That's strange, I wonder what's she's in a good mood about. Becky said as she watch her daughter run off.
Amber came back with the vegetables and asked her mum if she needed any help with the work in the kitchen and Becky was stunned to hear Amber ask such a question.
Are you alright my dear? Becky asked as she looked at her daughter to be sure there wasn't any problem.
Mum I'm fine, why do you ask? Amber replied even more excitedly.
Oh dear! There's definitely something up with you, you never help me out in the kitchen until right now. Becky finally said.
Come on mum! You should be happy with me that I want to help today, I just feel like I should today. Amber said smiling at her mum.
Spill it girl, what's up? Becky couldn't believe whatever she had said as a reason for her excitement.
Okay fine, I'm going out on a date with Phil... He's taking me to the Lantern Festival tonight! Amber finally gave in to her mum.
Becky was happy to see her daughter excited about the festival unlike usual because Amber had always preferred staying at home than going to the festival in the past ones. They prepared lunch together, ate, talked a lot about the festival and Amber began to prepare for 7pm, Phil was to pick her up by that time.
At the Lantern Festival, Phil and Amber couldn't stop feeling happy about writing their wishes together on a yellow lantern before they send it away. Amber was surprised to see that they both had the same wishes and that was to be together all the days of their lives.
They had first met as kids and grew up childhood friends but took a step forward when other relationships was not working for them and they realized they were made for each other but never thought of it. The two had not gone a proper date until the Lantern Festival day.
Phil watched Amber as she wrote one more wish on the Lantern after giving off her ever lovely smile.
What did you wish for again? Phil asked as he noticed Amber was trying to hide her last wish.
It's nothing, you don't have to know! Amber said waiting for the time to send the Lantern away.
Phil tried so many times to see what she wrote but couldn't and he gave up. They light up the Lantern and held it together looking at each other with bright smiles before they let it go.
The Lantern flew up slowly and Amber's last wish became visible to Phil... He was so surprised to read what she had wished for, he turned to look at Amber who was already staring at him with a half smile.
How did you know I was sick? I never told you... Phil asked Amber still looking surprised.
I know and I wish you could open up to me more please... Amber replied with a pleading face.
I will, I'm sorry and like you wished, I'll be fine... Phil said as he hugged Amber passionately.
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That’s absolutely lovely. 🤗❤️💕
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That’s very sweet @merit.ahama, but the sweetest thing is the unexpected ending you provide. We expect a soppy love story and you change the measure of the tale with your clever conclusion - yes, love is about much more than a few happy feelings, it’s about understanding when your partner needs you to be there for them, too. Beautiful!
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I'm glad you like the ending I came up with, thought I could change the story a but hehe
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Awwwn. Young love. I really hope they end up together. Your characters were very realistic. They did what they played their roles so well, especially Amber but just when I was satisfied with her Phils story got to me. He is a stong man...so young and so strong
Yeah, he's strong indeed... To have wanted to act strong even though he was sick 🥲
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A beautiful love story. I believe Phil will get better for her sake.
Yeah, he sure will
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this feels like a small section of a story underway and I will comment as such.
the interaction between Amber and Becky feels natural, though the way it is written it feels that Becky is the MC. This means when we move to part two with Amber and Phil it feels like a change of focus.
The interaction at the Lantern festival is interesting and I hope this is part of larger story as I would love to have more details of the feel of the festival.
Haha this is the whole story, the point is a mother who understands her child and a couple who are trying to learn and stay together for life 😊
What a nice story ☺️. Conversation is vital for a budding relationship
Indeed, it is 🙂
As I read this part, I just remembered PERFECT by Ed Sheeran: "We were just kids when we fell in love, not knowing...." Its a perfect description eeehn
Come to think of it, those who fell in love as kids, didn't really fall for any physical appearance or for money. Like, I mean those who still had the childhood innocence within them.... no be pikins of nowadays wey don tear eyes anyhow.
Chai... me dah didnt have any childhood babe like this... my own don worst oooo...
No hope yet
Haha see where your mind go with the story, wonderful thinker! 😂
You get childhood babe, you just nor wan let us know how you hide your feelings from her back then 🚶♀️