The Kingdom of Bamboo

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Toby was a cute young panda bear, who was raised by a herd of Bengal tigers. He even grew up with his sister, a beautiful tiger named Lotus as the flower. She was beautiful and strong, and she taught him all about the tactics of marriage and defense. Toby was found on the bank of a river by a herd of tigers. He was very small and wrapped in a lot of bamboo leaves, but he eventually became a teenager. He was well respected by his family of cats, and all over the forest he became known as this great panda raised among the tigers.


All had shone of tranquility, but in the village of the Bengal Tiger came to a detail, the legion of wolves was taking over all the mountains and forests near them, the queen of the Tiger Tara told his people that if they were not threatened there was nothing to worry about, the days continued until two bears came to the village, one polar bear and one panda, They managed to reach the village of the tigers, these pairs of bears, when they saw the number of cats were very scared, until the queen arrived and asked what they were doing in their domain, they said they were looking for the bear who lived with them, he approached and was happy to see other bears, but the bears when they saw the panda bear, they bowed to their king.


The reason for our visit is for our king to return to his kingdom of Bamboo in the mountains, they explained to him that his Grandmother had died and his parents had been caught by the wolves, that for your safety they left you in the tiger kingdom, the Bamboo leaves they found you in were royalty, that's why they took care of you, The young Toby asks his tiger mother Tara this tells him it was true, the queen tells him everything and says my son has to go to save what belongs to you and save your parents, he accepts his legacy, his sister Lotus accompanies him, not only that the queen tells several of his tiger to accompany him on his journey that she was going to call the other kingdoms and other cats to defend themselves from the wolves.


So begins this journey was a journey of a hundred days and a hundred nights, to reach the land of the mountains of the kingdom of Bamboo, but everything was just shadow and cold, there is no trace of a panda, until they were radiated, but the small group of tigers defended the king panda, the attacking wolves fled, managed to free the pandas locked in cages, was glad to see his hometown, only needed to recover his father and mother, climbed with his sister Loto to the highest mountain, The bears and tigers stayed to take care of the people, but he knew that not everything was going to be easy, when they arrived at the place they saw in two bamboo sticks tied his father, only that the whole legion of wolves was waiting for him, so that Toby would give his kingdom in exchange, the young panda accepted only wants to see his father alive, but at that moment, from far below the mountains he heard how a large battalion of animals was approaching, it was only Queen Tara the great tigra.


At the side were the kingdom of gorillas, elephants, rhinos, rhinos, hawks, rabbits, ostriches, squirrels, buffaloes, all these kingdoms went to support the king panda, the young panda takes his father and embraces them, Queen Tara expels far away the legion of wolves, to distant lands, after expelling the wolves the queen, All the animals present from the different kingdoms bowed before the new panda king. Toby's panda parents thanked Queen Tara for taking care of their son, she told them that it was an honor for her to have taken care of the future panda king in the village. Thus reigned peace in the kingdom of Bamboo and its other neighboring kingdoms.


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Thank you for sharing your folk tale in The Ink Well, @newton666, and welcome. Please be sure to look around The Ink Well, engage with other writers and their work, and see all the resources available to our community — especially our community rules, which describe the "do's and don'ts" of posting in The Ink Well.

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Hi @newton666. Interesting story! It has a sense of stories retold from long ago.

One tip I thought I'd share with you is that your stories will be more readable if you add more punctuation. Each separate "idea" should be a complete sentence to ensure that we know when one idea ends and another begins. Here's an example of where you could end your sentences.

Current first paragraph (all one long sentence):

Toby was a cute young panda bear, which was raised by a herd of Bengal tigers, he even grew up with his sister a beautiful tigra named Lotus as the flower, but she was beautiful and strong, she taught him all about the tactics of marriage and defense, Toby was found on the bank of a river by a herd of tigers, but they were so small wrapped in a lot of bamboo leaves, and eventually became a teenager, he was well respected by his family of cats, all over the forest became known to this great panda raised among the tigers.

Recommended edit with periods added to separate the many ideas into separate sentences:

Toby was a cute young panda bear, who was raised by a herd of Bengal tigers. He even grew up with his sister, a beautiful tigra named Lotus as the flower. She was beautiful and strong, and she taught him all about the tactics of marriage and defense. Toby was found on the bank of a river by a herd of tigers. He was very small and wrapped in a lot of bamboo leaves, but he eventually became a teenager. He was well respected by his family of cats, and all over the forest he became known as this great panda raised among the tigers.

I hope that helps! We also have some great recommendations in the post, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which is in our catalog of fiction writing tips. It describes how to use Google Docs to draft your content so it will point out errors, and then you can just click to fix them. It's a great tool!

Good luck and keep writing.

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thank you for the observation and I will take it to improve.

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