Akalyn

He was born with great powers, he can fly, people were jealous, they wanted to kill him but they couldn't because he was the one the gods protected.

Although he was a child, he could stop the battles of the squirrel men who wanted to haunt people's lives at night.

His father called him that day to go hunting, Zed, his father, was a great hunter, in the forest, he saw an antelope, he shot it, but the antelope ran and the bullet hit the son of his neighbor.

Zed was so surprised that it was a boy standing there and not an antelope.

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Zed at that moment, remembers the story of his grandmother, where she told him when he was a child, that the animals that are so old in the forest can take the image of people themselves.

The boy's father didn't know how the bullet came out or who fired it, Zed couldn't hide, he came up to him and was crying.

Kalu slapped him as if that was enough for his son's death, he couldn't say anything but took his son home and presented the case to the community elders.

In the Akalyn community, the old doctrine was still used, which is "Tooth for tooth and blood for blood". Zed was called to speak if what Kalu said was true.

Zed admits that he mistakenly shot the boy thinking he was an antelope, he had never had such an encounter before in his hunting career.

According to the law of the land, Akalyn, his son, would also be sacrificed, so that he would serve justice.

Akalyn wasn't very clear about what would happen that night, he only saw his father sitting on the bench and he couldn't get any sleep all night.

It was not long again, the dead men who served in the sacrificial realm came to his house and took Akalyn away.

Because it was said that, once the men arrived at Zed's house at night, what happens next with his son is none of his business, as long as justice is done, since they are the basic rules of their Kingdom.

Akalyn was taken to the sacrificial realm, but the gods could not accept him as a sacrifice because he was too powerful to be given to the gods.

In the morning, Kalu was so aggressive that he thought Zed had bribed the dead men or done something to them that prevented them from doing their duty.

He was so shocked that when he drew a matchet to Zed's house, his matchet turned into a large stone.

A prophecy predicted that what happened is that Zed was used, not as if he did it on purpose, but the King's men who fly like squirrels in the night to haunt people's lives, still support that Akalyn should be killed, so he can never stop their bad work again at night.

The king had no idea that some of his elders have a secret motive why they want Akalyn to be killed under must, after that day's meeting, they agree to throw him into the river of the goddess, as they threw him, he came out alive.

Three elders began to confess their sins, that they are the ones behind the death of Kalu's son, they want Zed to kill him so that Akalyn will be brought down as well.

Because since the day the child was born, their work at night could not progress any further, Akalyn would fight with them and stop them from tormenting the people.

It was the men who confessed their sins who were thrown into the river of the goddess, the Kingdom of Akalyn continue to be fruitful.

This is an original fictional story, created by me. Thanks and have a great day ahead.



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This was a very good story :) ... I see you have come a long way 🙌

However, it would have been absolutely amazing with dialogue, and letting us know the character's personalities :)

!PIZZA !ALIVE !LOL

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