A Tale of Two Pizzas - A Gathering of Wealth

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Under the cover of darkness, Delilah edged forward on foot through the undergrowth, her eyes well accustomed to the dimly lit surroundings after her long ride. If recent events had taught her anything it was that nothing could be taken at face value and nobody could be trusted anymore. And so it was that she decided to approach the road with an exaggerated degree of caution, leaving an exhausted Jet tied up in a nearby copse. As she moved delicately through the wet brush she thought of the cool dampness of the rising mist from earlier, licking at her face, with a gentle but ominous warning of the rain that would soon follow. She should have heeded the signs; she should have turned back. But now, it was too late, and she could only move forwards and face up to whatever lay ahead.

As the streetlamp came back into view, Delilah could once again make out the familiar shapes that she had noticed from the hillside. What she had first assumed to be a few abandoned vehicles, now revealed themselves as the backmarkers in a long line of neatly parked motor cars that stretched a good hundred metres down the road. There must have been at least 30 of them, stacked bumper to bumper. It was a sight to behold. Even as the daughter of a baron, she had not had the opportunity previously to see such a gathering of wealth in one place. Fuel being such a precious post-Fall commodity, meant that hardly anybody across the barony had the luxury of owning, let alone running motorised transport these days.

With that, the whirring of the engine that had initially grabbed her attention, along with the flickering lights she had seen on her approach to the road, got louder and a pair of headlamps crested the hill ahead, as a large black luxury sedan started making its way down towards her position. She pulled back instinctively, hiding her face in her hood and tucking in as low as she could into the undergrowth. As the lights went past, she crept down alongside the parked cars, keeping below the window line and managing to keep up with the slowing sedan. It came to a stop at the end of the road, its headlamps illuminating a large iron gate set between two steel obelisks. Peering over the edge of the last parked vehicle's bonnet, she could now make out the massive stone walls adjoining the gate towers which appeared to wrap their way around the trees as they seemingly disappeared into the small surrounding woodland.

The car's lights flashed a few times and two shadowy figures emerged from one of the steel towers, stopping momentarily beside the driver's window, before motioning the vehicle towards the gates, which were now opening up before them. As the vehicle glided through the gates and beyond the walls, the masculine figures turned and made their way back into the tower, the light from the open door glinting off the steel of the double-barrels, held purposefully in their hands.

Delilah had more unanswered questions running through her head now than before she'd left the house. Being curious, and still very lost, she had an insatiable desire to have at least a few of them answered. Teeth chattering, she flicked the wet hair out of her face. This turn of events wasn't helping her to get back on track with her intended mission. It was, however, becoming a compelling adventure in itself.

"Heeh-Heeh-Heeh!!" Jet's neigh broke the silence. Delilah's eyes darted nervously towards the tower but evidently, the men inside had heard nothing behind its thick steel walls, and the door remained closed, as the minutes ticked by.

She turned her head back towards the copse from where she could now hear Jet whickering and shifting his weight around uneasily beneath the boughs of the old Oaktree. She still had no idea where they were but she was absolutely certain that this was not the Port town that she had been seeking, and could only hope that Jet wouldn't draw any attention to their ill-fated presence.

She backed off quickly and quietly from the road and made her way back to the copse. Now that the rain had subsided, she needed to have a dig in her saddlebags to see if she could find a dry tunic amongst her possessions. As she approached the beautiful black stallion, she noticed that he appeared calmer than before. She caressed his face and pulled him in close. "There's my good boy, now where's that dry jumper of mine?" She was about to move around to open her side bags when she noticed something small and white at her feet. Bending down to pick it up, she froze. A sugar cube. Somebody had been there. Somebody was probably still there ... and now that somebody knew that she was there too! She reached sharply for the reins to pull herself up into the saddle as quickly as possible; escape now the only thing on her mind, but the reins went taught and pulled back.

Her body tensed and she raised her eyes defiantly to meet those of her would-be adversary. Instead, she found herself staring straight into a pair of familiar big brown doe-eyes.

"Henry!" she stammered. "What on earth are you doing here?"

"I've been following you all night, Delilah! You don't half make things difficult. Your father seemed very upset yesterday about your nighttime shenanigans and, seeing you leave on Jet again this evening, I was worried that you may come to some harm or at the very least get yourself into a fix. So I saddled up Amber and here I am. As for you getting yourself into a pickle, it turns out I wasn't far wrong..."

This was written for A Tale of Two Pizzas - Ongoing contest week 10

Photo credit: Pedro Figueras



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Excellent writing!! I havent been following the pizza stories hehehe just a few here and there but I was really captivated by your writing skill!!!!!

One quick edit... The end "what ON earth are you doing here" hehehe

How many people are in the contest now?

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ah, cheers for that edit. Don't know how I missed that one lol. Corrected🙌😍The number of entries varies week on week. I joined in for the first time in week 7, entered again weeks 8 and 10. Last week I got too involved in other Hive projects lol. Usually, the same 3-4 folk who submit an entry to @dibblers.dabs, and then the odd extra entry or two may come along. @dibblers.dabs, @wrestlingdesires, @jesustiano, @an-man, and @onewolfe are all regulars. It's a fun novella concept and a new challenge for me to write parts of a novel and have to pick up on plots, themes, and new characters originating in the minds of others and carrying them forwards each week, whilst at the same time introducing my own creative elements to the storyline😜💗 You should give it a go @dreemsteem. Be part of the first Hive novella to be published on the blockchain 😀

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I've missed out on the last few weeks because I've been busy with stuff but I'm planning on getting back into it. It's definitely worth getting into simply for the fun aspect of it.

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Definitely, I missed week 9 being too busy both on other Hive projects and IRL lol. Be good to see you back !PIZZA

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Can't wait to be back! Thanks for the !PIZZA meant to put it in the original comment but got in a hurry.

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lols no worries, not a requirement ha ha. Hurry back mate ... this thing is growing legs lols

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Many legs all over and growing. !PIZZA

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Yea come on back, it is easier to keep up then catch up.

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My goal is to get back into this weeks contest. Definitely easier to not have to catch up!

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The more ideas that flow through the more there is to go on. Looking forward to reading your work. !PIZZA

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Hehhehehe how do you all pick how it goes though??? Lol

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dibblers.dabs does the choosing on which part is chosen, then writes another section to go off of.

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ah ok! hehehehe so everyone knows where they are going from... got it!!!

that's cool - ok maybe I will try hehehehe

Is there someplace that shows the one thread?

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There is no try, only do. hahaha Do try, it is fun as you go along with the narrative. At this time there is no one thread but there is multiple posts on different accounts. This link has all the chapters in order at the top of the post --> https://www.proofofbrain.blog/hive-132410/@dibblers.dabs/a-tale-of-two-pizzas-ongoing-contest-week-10 also with the entries that did not make it. Still fun to read.

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hahahahaha oh ok - so you knew the right words to get me onto it! hahahaha

@wrestlingdesires will be happy to see you pulled me in! hehehehe

ok i'll have to figure out what the last thing is to add on... and i definitely do not have time to read multiple threads for 10 chapters hahahahah but i will do my best to get something happening! LOL

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I was inspired to say those words, i am glad it worked. Looking forward to your words to inspire me.

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hehehehe i love the word also "inspired".

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Tis a good word that has served me well.

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A hint, he's picking multiple entries as long as they fit together :) So us regulars are trying to focus on limiting ourselves to one set of characters / scene so that we can all be in it :) For example I can write about Rachel and Barry, Sam about Delilah, Onewolf about Danny, Jesustiano about Frankches and Charlie, etc

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Yes this collaborative working has also allowed the story to move forward on more fronts a bit quicker😊 I kinda forgot to mention which part I was writing this week ...my bad ... but I did choose Delilah lol (which you probably guessed I would do @wrestlingdesires 😂) I don't think I clashed with any of the other regulars though 🙏

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She doesn't clash with any of the others, and you kept it to her and the groom, so I can't imagine why it won't fit ♥️

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hahahaha but that makes it hard to follow one thread for people coming on now!!! LOLOL i have a lot of reading to do i think??? LOL

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oh ok so we all kinda have an input as to the direction the story takes as we all get to write our own take on the plot and character development each week, but @dibblers.dabs ultimately makes the decision as to which chapters make it into the novella as it's his contest. Basically he writes a chapter each week then invites entries from the community for the next chapter following his. The only rules are that it should fit within the context of the world-building going on and have the Pizza Barons' story as the central theme. So you can create new characters, subplots etc but it must all make sense and flow with the central theme. ie: It must read logically and be sound in terms of timing within the novel etc. There are quite a few characters stories and/orsubplots that can be progressed at any one time and/or interwoven more deeply within the story. We each pick up on different threads each week; whatever sparks our creative interest at the time. Dibblers.dabs then reads all the entries and chooses at least 1 winner from amongst them to be the next chapter in the book. Sometimes he chooses two if they fit! Winners each week get 20 Pizza tokens and 5 SBI sponsorship. Worthy entries that don't make the final cut may also get a discretionary Pizza award but not guaranteed eg: if the writing was good but perhaps the storyline would have contradicted another chosen entry's development of the plot. He's nice like that. Then he writes the next chapter. The story so far can be read by reading all the posts in the order they are mentioned at the start of each of @dibblers.dabs chapters that he writes. So @dibblers.dabs writes every second chapter in the novel and can steer things more frequently. If you do get a chance, it is a lot of fun and nobody knows where the story will go next lol. I may have an ide in mind and write a chapter this week (max 1000 words), and perhaps it gets accepted. I write more on it next week but somebody else also writes on it and their entry is chosen over mine and so the story takes an unexpected turn in my eyes lol ...it's all part of the fun and the challenge to be adaptive and creative. At the very end, it will be published on the Hive as a novella with all contributing authors acknowledged and sharing in the post rewards.

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hahahahaha sounds like fun - i want to try! but.... will look at the plate this week and see if it fits! LOLOLOL thanks for the awesome explanation !

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I might have got carried away lol... It's my M.O. when I get excited or passionate about something and want to share 😂😂😂

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ummmmmmmmm.... LOL

do NOT look at your dm in discord

hahahahahahaha

you will see the definition of being carried away 😲😂

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I really appreciate you giving this awesome explanation and breakdown of how it all works! Most weeks so far I have given more than one person a prize- even if only 1 entry is included in the main plots! It's been really fun so far and I appreciate you all pushing the story forward!
!PIZZA
!ALIVE
!LUV

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You are welcome. I hope my diatribe did it justice lol

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oh it certainly did! I am thinking that if/when we bring this experiment to a close I'd like to improve the process a little and start a new contest/story. I'm really enjoying the format and the challenge! I think we have come up with a really unique story and it holds together amazingly well considering the number of hands involved so far!
!PIZZA

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"If recent events had taught her anything it was that nothing could be taken at face value and nobody could be trusted anymore." How very fitting this line is when it come to the storyline. Nice entry. !PIZZA

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lol why do I think she might be outside of the Oil Baron's city? If she is, her best bet is to turn around and go home, soaked or not 😂

!PIZZA and !ALIVE

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🤣 !PIZZA Sound advice... but will she??? 🤷I guess we might find out next week depending on who writes about her and where the story is taken💗🙌

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