RE: #fastandfurious | The Ink Well Fast and Furious Festival - Day One

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Hello @theinkwell thank you very much for this challenge, it was very satisfying to participate, the creation lasted 30 minutes.

I guess expert writers should do it in 10 minutes. But I am very happy, I did all the homework and I will go to bed with excitement waiting for the second day.

Thank you 🙋🏽

Also take advantage and make the first comment, I leave it below.

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one

This is the comment I made to @raj808

I laughed a little because of the description of his characters, a little eccentric but the dialogue also gives us the opportunity to blow up our imagination and exaggerate the description.

I liked very much his post, very organized his presentation, has helped me with the options of the labels always I doubt with them.

congratulations🤝

This is the comment I made to @jayna
Good work on task 1.

I felt that it was not a description of characters, but a story that enthralls the life of those characters. The first part I loved the second part I missed a little bit.

On task 2.

I liked the dialogue but again I had the perception that it was long, so I went to check with a word counter 🙈 and

This is the comment I made to @kaerpediem
It is curious to see the different personality traits of our characters, they are so different.

However there is something in common between you and me and the other participants. We all assume the average age for each character being the last one older.

I liked your dialogue very much, I felt the person's anger and I think I even took their side. 🤣😬 Good job.

This is the comment I made to @iamraincrystal

It's interesting that in the description of your characters you haven't included age, I think you're the first to do that.

I liked your dialogue, especially the firmness and security of the man. He really liked that woman 🤣👏 @iamraincrystal

This is the comment I made to @dwixer

Hi, to comment and vote on your post I had to look for you at hive.blog because I don't have the application you post from.

Maybe it's better to share the links from hive or peakd so you don't miss the opportunity to comment or vote.

Going back to your post, I really liked the dialogue. I think that nurses' conversation is more common than fiction 😜

This is the comment I made to @gilliatt

What a good story, it surprised me several times in the development of the events.

Excellent, I think you have a talent for this, go ahead and don't be discouraged. 👍 Congratulations.



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