The Great Hatred - Theinkwell Prompt

avatar

Ade was the most favourite son of his father. He so much get to love and get along with his father than the rest of the brothers and sisters he has

Well Ade was born to the family of Mr and Mrs Olu of the family of 6. 2 elder brothers he has and one elder sister making him the youngest and the last born of the family of Mr and Mrs Olu.

Been a tender heart and always with this innocent and Charming eyes, he always tend to attract attention from outside people to an extent people get to love him than the rest of his brother.

Ade always have a way of making you to get to his side and love him either with the way he speak with so much innocence in his speech or the way he laugh with that charming smile always in display on his face.

Been quickly exposed to life at a tender age and been virtually almost everyone favourite, he begin to gain massive attention that he himself will not have dream of. Well perhaps because he is who he is

It even get to a point where by he was getting been envied and jealous from his elder brothers and sister and they were beginning to wonder why people don't get along with them as they always do with Him. It was so severe to an extent hatred begin to develop at a point in time in their family but thank God for the wisdom of the parent which help to settle it. Well though to an extent it was not 100% settled.

pexels-photo-1172207.jpeg

Image Source

Even in Ade working place, the story remains the same. Due to his Diligence and hardwork attributes couple with the other additional Charming effect he has, everybody love him and soon he even become his boss favourite.

Well Ade for the main time was learning Automobile repairs for the main time he will get admission to the university to study his dream course Mechanical Engineering.

Bola was one of the apprentice of Ade boss called Boss Red in their working place. Boss red was called that name because of his nature of his eyes whenever he is angry. So reddish in eyes and he can do and undo.

Bola seeing that in a matter of months, Ade has already turn to become the boss favourite and quickly gotten the Boss favour well even ahead of Him. He begin to wonder and in a matter of time, he developed envy and jealousy towards Ade in the working place.

The shocking thing is all through this was happening, Ade was not aware and he loved Bola with wholeheartedly irrespective of this. He begin to wonder whether how long will Ade keep getting Favour from His Boss ahead of Him even though He has stayed with his Boss for so many years ahead of Ade.

pexels-photo-670720.jpeg

Image Source

The day passed and the more he see His Boss getting Ade love much more than Him and even giving Ade some special Treatment he should be enjoying but didn't all this year's, the more it grew and the more this envy and jealous turns to hatred towards Ade.

He get to a point the hatred keep growing strongly and strongly as day goes by, and he was start contemplating on how to eliminate or get Ade away from the way so that the favour can return back to him.

Bola keep nurturing this demon of hatred and it keep growing massively to become a massive giant within Him. The Great Hatred keep growing and keep growing as day goes by, the more he see Ade daily in the working place, the more the Great Hatred keep growing.

On this faithful day, Ade, Bola and the Boss Red was repairing a faulty car in a sunny afternoon. The Normal time to have a break was from 2-3pm so as to allow the apprentice to have time to get some lunch and regain the lost energy.

Juliet is a sales girl who help sell food from a restaurant close to the automobile repair shop and there has been negotiation with his Boss Red to always bring a plate of rice for his apprentice whenever it is time for break.

So that day was not special and left out. Juliet brings the plate. Gave Bola His own plate, serve Ade his own plate and went to package the Boss Red plate in his office. With so much attention diverted to the car been repaired, the three of them was so focus on repairing the car instead of eating at the hour of break. Ade requested His plate to be dropped in the tool shop. The tool shop is where all varieties of tools and equipment they always used in repairing is kept.

The moment Juliet went to drop Ade plate of food in the tool shop, the great Hatred came up with a devish thought within Bola that this is the time to eliminate Ade from the shop.

The Great Hatred Demon whisper to Him deep within me to take a step and go ahead to poison Ade food in the tool plate. By Him poisoning his food, Ade will be dead and so for life, Ade will be eliminated and he will get to enjoy back the favour from his boss which has been diverted to Ade since he came.

He was faced with so much Temptation of murder in order to carry out the envy and jealous act out and was wondering whether he should carry it out or not.

For the next 3 minutes he was loss in thought though was not noticeable among his boss and Ade at that particular time.

At that particular time of thinking whether he should yield towards the desire of the Great Hatred Demon and carry out and fall for the temptations, suddenly He was woken up by Ade just by the Resting chair.

Shocking to me, it has been a dream all this while.



0
0
0.000
7 comments
avatar

You handle the prompt well. Envy can lead to great temptation. How to rid ourselves of a rival? How to make the rival look less able? Many people may have these thoughts. Fortunately, for Bola, the thoughts were only in a dream. After having this dream he may realize how toxic his envy is and maybe he will be able to get beyond it.

Thank you for sharing this story with us. We appreciate that you engage with other authors in the community.

0
0
0.000
avatar

Yea. Bola was thanking His stars it turns out to be a dream because he can't just bear the guilt of murder

Yea I have engaged with others authors

Thank you for stopping by @theinkwell

0
0
0.000
avatar

Ade sure have a charm. Bola could have gotten more closer to Ade, at least with that he might get a tip on how the magic works hahahaha.
Thankfully it was a dream, envy is so bad it can mislead and you will only get to realize the deed later when the harm is already done.

0
0
0.000
avatar

String charm ade has. He must be quite lucking and thanking his stars

0
0
0.000
avatar

Damn!
Some dreams are very costly to miss.
Why waking up at the 11th hour.
Well, it's the reality which we have to face.
After all, it's a dream, not come true.
Envy, gilt and fantasy Ina a story. It's really nice.
Nice story you've got here

0
0
0.000
avatar

Bola should be grateful it is a dream because that is close to be a murder case

0
0
0.000
avatar

Hahahaha
That's right
Thanks for stopping by

0
0
0.000