RE: The Dying Body Chronicles 16: YOURS ETERNALLY

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The narrator lulls us into confidence in his innocent posture. His tone, his words are neutral. However, the narrator does explain:

...words are crude objects even in the most eloquent tongue, as long as the mind is delinquent enough.

There is deceit and sabotage, though readers don't learn this until the very end. Your choice of language creates and atmosphere that reflects the apocalyptic nature of your story. Style and content are consistent.

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Indeed no heroes here. Lots of people who commit heinous crimes often do not see that they do wrong.

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