RE: Genesis

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A Genesis rethought as science fiction would have it, @warpedpoetic. Thanks for posting it in our community.

You may want to edit it to remove repeated paragraphs.

Thanks for considering the dynamic where all writers support each other's work with their meaningful comments.



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Please I can't find the repetition. If you are referring to paragraphs three and four, they are quite different. Thank you for reading. It means a lot.

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