Mike's Choice (plus original fractal art by me) Word Prompt: A Fork In The Road

copy_of_copy_of_copy_of_copy_of_copy_of_dark_and_cream_specials_coffee_photo_collage_5_.jpg

I am stranded on a strange world. None of the intelligent beings have fur except on the very top of their heads. And they mostly prefer sitting to moving around. I'm here to study them, and assess if they are candidates for first contact. Oh, did I mention that they are giants?

My ship was damaged as I entered the planet's atmosphere. It could not float because of the damage. Instead it's on the bottom of a vast body of water.

I was fortunate to have the strength to make it to land. It took three days, despite the currents being in my favor.

I was exhausted and hungry. Taking a chance, I slowly approached one of the structures. Outside of it I saw a cylinder.

The wonderful aroma coming from it drew me instantly. Soon my powerful torso was inside, while my back legs were sticking in the air.

"Mike, did you remember to put the lid on the trashcan?"

"Sorry Mom, I'll do it now!"

"Whoa!!! What's that?" a voice said. I froze, hoping that I wouldn't be discovered.

"What a cool toy!" said a voice, as strong hands gripped my waist.

"Ugh! It's soaked. Oh well, I can fix that."

Then the alien put a disc shaped object over the wonderful smelling cylinder, and fastened it. I still hadn't moved. I was hoping it would think that I was dead, so that I could escape. Or at least activate the translator which had been designed by my predecessor, who was gifted in the sciences of language and technology.

The alien decided to carry me by an arm, so I went limp. It was painful, but it gave me a chance to flick on my translator without alerting the huge creature.

"Guess what someone threw away, Mom. It's the coolest figurine I've ever seen, it almost looks like it could get up and walk."

"Well let's see it?"

"It's soaked, I'm going to take it in the bathroom and use the hairdryer on it. You'll like it much better if it's dry."

"Yes dear, a dirty soaked object from the trash really doesn't sound very appealing. You can show me later when it's clean and dry."

I was then taken into a smaller room, and placed in a sort of small pool. Suddenly warm water was streaming all over me. But this water was different, there wasn't any salt in it. And it felt so good! It cleansed my fur, and the warmth restored sore muscles.

Once I was clean, the alien took me out of the pool, and dried me with a cloth. It then plugged in a machine, and turned it on. The thing was so loud that I jumped, and tried to get away.

"What? This can't be a toy!" said the alien, quickly grabbing my waist. I struggled for all I was worth, but it was hopeless.

"Don't worry, I won't hurt you."

I was placed gently down in a massive pool similar to the first, but this one was empty. I sincerely hoped it would remain that way.

"Can you understand me?"

I had never tested the speech option of my translator, though the designer had made sure it was fully functional of course. It hadn't seemed necessary for me to get used to it. I was only to make first contact in an emergency.

Adjusting the speech box so it rested against my vocal cords, I made first contact. It definitely qualified as an emergency. And I wasn't exactly giving away the secret of my people's existence. I had already been discovered.

"Hello, please don't harm me. I am a scientist, here for peaceful purposes. My ship was destroyed entering your atmosphere."

"Wow... How can I help?"

"First can you please hand me that cloth so I can finish drying off? I appreciate the warm water, but I really would like to be dry now. I have been in water for three days."

"Sure, but the hair dryer would be faster." he said, holding the monstrous machine.

"Is it dangerous?"

"Nah. Let me show you." said the alien, flicking a switch and pointing it at its own head. It laughed as its only fur, which was on top of the head, flew in every direction.

It did look effective. The creature slowly lowered it, and pointed it away from me. This gave me the opportunity to gradually test it out. It was warm air! I have never felt anything so good.

Once I finished, the kind alien turned off the machine. "What would you like to do now?"

"I need something to eat. Whatever you have in the cylinder will be perfect."

"That was garbage. Waste. I can get you something much better. My name is Mike. I am a human male, fifteen years old."

"My name in your language would be CobCob. I am a CooVoo male, 350 years old."

"Wow, you're even older than Grandpa. Do you want to go choose something to eat?"

"Yes, very much."

The alien named Mike gently picked me up, and carried me into a room with a large rectangular box. He opened it, and a light came on.

"What would you like?" he asked, lowering me for a better look. Once I selected my meal by smelling the objects, Mike took me into yet another room.

"You can eat your fruit in here, let me lock the door so Mom and Dad won't walk in and see you moving around."

"What are you going to do with me?" I asked as I ate the best food I had ever tasted. I had guessed from his actions and age that he was not fully grown yet.

"I don't know yet... You would make an awesome pet. But I think you're more of a person than an animal."

"Yes, I am from an advanced civilization. I would deeply appreciate my freedom, but I would also like to stay here for a while."

"I'll help you in any way I can, CobCob."

And so I settled in. I will try and find a way to contact my planet. Otherwise I will just have to wait until I am missed. The beacon in my translator will be strong enough to be detected by the search party, once they are on the planet's surface.

Mike's choice most likely cemented the future friendship of the CooVoo and Human races. I look forward to getting to know him, and telling him about my people as well. I did come to learn as much as possible about Humans, after all.

This is a 100% power up post

Image of alien is my own original artwork made in Apophysis. Edited in Canva to add text, background, and border.



0
0
0.000
49 comments
avatar

Oh my God, you are getting good at this Stuff.... I mean aliens and the rest.

It's amazing how you described the part figuratively and I was able to pictures the scenes and images

I hope that Mike will take good care of the human, and that this act won't get him in trouble with his family and the rest of the aliens

Nicely done as always 🥰

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thanks so much :) Mike is the human - the story is told from the view of a small furry alien :) The furry alien considers our species to be the aliens.

!PIZZA !ALIVE

0
0
0.000
avatar

Lol.... We are all aliens in their eyes and they are aliens in ours if that's the case

0
0
0.000
avatar

lol exactly! Now you understand what both Mike and CobCob were thinking :)

0
0
0.000
avatar

I completely understand......you did well with the scripts. ☺

0
0
0.000
avatar

Congratulations @wrestlingdesires! You have completed the following achievement on the Hive blockchain and have been rewarded with new badge(s) :

You got more than 3000 replies.
Your next target is to reach 3250 replies.

You can view your badges on your board and compare yourself to others in the Ranking
If you no longer want to receive notifications, reply to this comment with the word STOP

Check out the last post from @hivebuzz:

Hive Power Up Month - Feedback from Day 20
0
0
0.000
avatar

It's not Gulliver, and it's not ET. It's CobCob, and it deserves a unique place in the pantheon of delightful, extraordinary characters. A little bit of Star Trek and Close Encounters here, too.

Can you tell I liked it?

A really, really good job. One of the best exercises in perspective I've read in a long time. I don't think it's proper that you should have so much fun writing.

Bravo.

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thanks so much :) This one took a few days, which meant that my goal of a post a day was interrupted. But your comment tells me that it was worth it :)

!PIZZA !ALIVE

0
0
0.000
avatar

Really great short stories take a long time. But isn't the outcome worth it?

BTW, don't forget to link in the prompt post.

Thank you for the Pizza :)

0
0
0.000
avatar

You need to stake more ALIVE tokens (you can send 10 tips for every 1000 ALIVE tokens that you have staked)

0
0
0.000
avatar

You need to stake more ALIVE tokens (you can send 10 tips for every 1000 ALIVE tokens that you have staked)

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thank you for posting this excellent, unique story in the Ink Well community. This story shines. And, thank you for engaging with other writers in the community.

0
0
0.000
avatar

You need to stake more ALIVE tokens (you can send 10 tips for every 1000 ALIVE tokens that you have staked)

0
0
0.000
avatar

I have started to believe that you have your own spacecraft and you visit other planets every week or at least once in a fortnight. You are good at fiction bro.

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thanks, I wish I did!!! How much fun would it be to meet all of those aliens?!?!
!PIZZA !ALIVE

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thanks for the !PIZZA bro and I am sure you already have one :)

0
0
0.000
avatar

@sunnyag, sorry! You need more $PIZZA to use this command.

The minimum requirement is 20.0 PIZZA liquid, and 0.0 PIZZA staked.

More $PIZZA is available from Hive-Engine or Tribaldex

0
0
0.000
avatar

You need to stake more ALIVE tokens (you can send 10 tips for every 1000 ALIVE tokens that you have staked)

0
0
0.000
avatar

What an interesting and thrilling sci-fi story! You know you are very good at writing on this genre.

At first, I wondered what "intelligent beings have fur except on the very top of their heads". Then I realized it's humans! 😄 You almost lost me there, maybe because I was already imagining an alien.

Seeing the world through CobCob's eyes is the interesting thing for me in this story.

I love the rapport between Mike and CobCob. If this story continues, they will be good friends. Hopefully, CobCob's race are accommodating as he is!

0
0
0.000
avatar

lol yeah, they think of our hair as fur 😂

I tried to imagine what a small, furry race of people would think about us, and our homes.
!PIZZA !ALIVE

0
0
0.000
avatar

You need to stake more ALIVE tokens (you can send 10 tips for every 1000 ALIVE tokens that you have staked)

0
0
0.000
avatar

Loved it! The flip in perspective was great. Humans perceived as the aliens😊For just a moment I thought my immediate liking for Mike was about to go up in flames but then thankfully, he redeemed himself "You would make an awesome pet. But I think you're more of a person than an animal". A good choice made at the fork in the road of decision💯% I love how much fun you have with your writing and how that joy spills over into all of our lives💗

0
0
0.000
avatar

Hi @wrestlingdesires, you write an amusing story of mutual and instant sympathy between a space traveller, and a young human.

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thanks, I am happy that you liked it :) I enjoyed trying to decide what to do for this week's prompt :)

0
0
0.000
avatar

This story brought a smile to my face. It's always fascinating to look at our own behavior from the eyes of an outsider. That's why a Hitchhiker Guide's to the Galaxy was so much fun. This is a fun read.

0
0
0.000
avatar

I'm truly honored to be mentioned with that book :) Thanks so much for the compliment :) !!!

!PIZZA

0
0
0.000
avatar

"Wow... How can I help?"

I love, love, love the portrayal of complete innocence in these words. Instead of exploitation you have the wonderment and eagerness of a kid who just wants to help, I would like to think that motivation resides in all of us, and I really, really enjoyed your story and its message of optimism and hope. Most first contact tales don't have that narrative or tone, so I liked the foray into positivity for once.

Also, the old as grandpa part made me lol!

Great story @wrestlingdesires!

0
0
0.000
avatar

Thanks, I like to hope that first contact would go something like that :) Much better than the alternative!
!PIZZA

0
0
0.000
avatar

It's funny how you well-developed the sequence of the story. The way you created a situation to let the readers don't expect it is nice.

Cobcob, what a strange name but the story was well written.

0
0
0.000