The Legend Of Rattlesnake City - Word Prompt: Shadows

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"I can't believe we are finally going to explore the Rockies!"

"Believe it, Joe! And with a little luck, we will also find Rattlesnake City."

"That's just a legend, Roger." Joe laughed at the idea.

"I don't think it is. And if it's real, so is the gold."

"Yeah, guarded by a whole city full of rattlers. No thanks!"

"Grandpa told me a different version of the legend. I don't want to say anything here in the dorm though. Wait until after we get out there. It's better told over a campfire than on a campus anyway."

"Okay, but there's nothing you can say to get me anywhere near even one of those dudes. Forget about trying to drag me anywhere near a place named after them."

The two friends had been planning this trip for over six months. It was a graduation celebration, as well as one last break before they launched their business.

Warped Minds Entertainment was a good business plan. But it would take all of their considerable time and energy to make it a success. In particular it would be an uphill battle for two young college graduates to bring in investors.

"We're finally here, Roger! I can't decide what I want to do first. It's unreal, like a different planet."

"First we want to set up camp." laughed Roger, who had spent a good deal of time in the outdoors.

By the time everything was set up, it was time for supper. Afterwards Roger told his tale.

"Now we can discuss what Grandpa told me. The gorge in his story is the same one we are camped above. And I have a surprise. He recorded it, so you can hear his adventure first-hand." He then pulled out a small cassette player.

I was just a youngster, not as old as you. Fifteen years young! And I needed gold to buy my ranch. There was this old Navajo who sat by the front of the cafe, selling his art. Turquoise, carvings, and what have you.

I asked him about his traditions and stories every time I had a chance while I was growing up. His tales put your modern day movies to shame.

One of my favorites was about an ancient city carved into the wall of a deep gorge. According to David Bearclaw, when the hunting moon was three days from being full, its light would shine at just the right angle to show you the entrance.

You would know that you were in the right spot if the moon cast a shadow in the shape of a rattler coiled to strike. Dig into the soil at the snake's head. When you hit rock, you will find a crescent moon made of stone. Pull it. It's connected to a type of metal rope.

Once pulled, a small stone cave will reveal itself. Inside you will find a corner with a sort of ledge. And this part is important, Roger. There's a small flute without holes, or some type of whistle. It's made of bone, and is shaped like a rattlesnake ready to strike.

There's also writing carved on the wall in back of it, a huge mural. It's in many languages. English, various Native languages, what I now know to be Spanish, Japanese, Arabic, and Hebrew. And others I have not seen despite looking.

I don't know how it got there. This was made a very long time ago, before many of the races represented would have set foot on this continent.

But the words were most helpful. Vital if you expect to survive the adventure. Read them well before you proceed.

"There is treasure ahead, but danger is everywhere. Music can soothe your venemous brother.

Take what you can carry away, no more. Be grateful for all that you have. Never come back once you exit the city's door. Or Rattlesnake City will be your grave.

Tell no one else about what you have seen, unless you know they are worthy, with intentions that are pure. You are responsible for their actions. Their fate will be tied to yours, so be sure.

Do no harm, and beware of greed. Only take what you think you will need. Leave riches for others, and what you take will make great blessings.

When you go, leave the music where you found it. Pull the crescent moon. Otherwise you could be bit."

Roger, I know that's a weird thing to see on an ancient engraving. But it's real. I don't know who or what wrote it. But I do know that you need to follow the rules.

I was in there. I emptied my pack of everything except a length of rope, which it turned out I didn't need. I put everything outside of the cave.

I took the whistle, and began playing immediately as I opened the entrance beside the ledge. Moonlight was streaming into the stone city, revealing millions of rattlesnakes. I think light was redirected using mirrors, but I'm not sure. It was almost as bright as day, but there were still plenty of shadows.

Not wanting to step on a sleeping rattler, I watched my step. Making my way towards the biggest building, I saw many things. Gold bars lining walkways to homes. Ornaments encrusted with jewels.

There was even a forge with a magnificent sword sitting next to it. The hilt was adorned with jewels. The centerpiece was a ruby bigger than my fist. The sheath was also a masterpiece. Oh, how I wanted to possess that work of art! Curled on top of the blade was a baby rattlesnake, fast asleep.

On the other side of the forge was a dagger. It looked like it had been freshly sharpened, and had a fine point. The hilt was plainer than the sword. But still a work of art. It was pure gold, and in the shape of a rattler's head, already striking, fangs outstretched. The eyes were small rubies.

I picked it up. I could easily kill the sleeping snake. Or just try to take the sword. But the words on the tablet were fresh in my mind. I tucked the dagger into my belt and went on regretfully.

Further on, I reached my intended destination. It turned out to be a palace. Except for the snakes, the entire city was deserted. Not even a skeleton, human or snake.

I entered the throne room, and beheld a crown which could have bought every ranch in Colorado. I could have worn it, and still stuffed my pack. Unfortunately it had a snake coiled among the points, sleeping peacefully thanks to the music from the whistle.

I took the diamonds which were scattered at the foot of the throne. I also selected the finest rings from the intricately carved oak chest beside it.

Deciding that despite being heavy, gold would be easier to spend without being questioned too thoroughly. I took a mixture of both jewels and gold.

By the time I got back to the little door leading to the cave, my back was hurting. I was ready to leave, having explored to my satisfaction, and gathering more than I had ever dreamed of.

I followed the instructions to the letter. And here I am today, with one of the biggest Quarterhorse ranches in the state. And good health, despite being one hundred come December. How many old-timers like me can still get on a horse, let alone ride all day?

"You can't really believe that, Roger? He's just trying to give you a good adventure before you have to settle down."

"Oh, I don't know... Then where did this come from?" Roger asked, pulling out a very sharp dagger. It had a very lifelike gold rattlesnake head, teeth bared. Its eyes were red rubies.

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There are all kinds of shadows. You have here the shadow of the moon of course. But you also have other shadows. There is a shadow hanging over anyone who takes from the treasure, the shadow of all those those who come after. That's a kind of existential shadow. I know you probably didn't mean it this way, but that is the shadow each of us lives with. Our actions affect others and in a way we are responsible for how that effect changes their lives. Kind of the Butterfly Effect. I know, way too philosophical...but I can't help myself :)

This is well organized and well written. The descriptions of snake city are compelling. Really creepy. Wouldn't get me near the place.

Thanks for rising to the challenge this week with such an original interpretation of the prompt.

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Thanks so much for your very kind words yet again, you really are making me want to write a story a day more with each reply ♥️

The prompt made this week's story so fun to do! Who wouldn't want to visit an abandoned city full of snakes and treasure?!?!

Thanks for the tip as well :)
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Rattlesnake City. That alone is a 'hook'. And you use other names creatively: David Bearclaw, for example. This is a sophisticated well-wrought story, a great response to the prompt. Thanks for posting the story in the Ink Well community,and thank you for engaging with other members of the community.

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I'm glad you enjoyed reading it ♥️

I do try to make each better than the last, but sometimes the prompt just brings up something that is both fun and fairly easy to write :)

That's what happened here. The only real problems were the message on the ledge, and when to stop. I was debating whether or not to send the boys out afterwards.

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Ah this story was creepy, well-written, the ruby eyes were a nice touch

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Treasure always needs to have some jewels in it :) Who wouldn't want such a cool dagger!

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I have always felt that writing scary stories was not easy but when I read your stories, I feel scared and they sound real to me. I am not a fearful type but your stories make me afraid. Well done bro!

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Thanks for your compliment :) This one was more of a legend than a horror story, unless you are afraid of snakes :)

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I am afraid of snakes, dogs, and people that can ride a horse the whole day at the age of 100 :)

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😂I guess a lot of stories must seem scary then?

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Not all though, if the man was under 80, it would be fine 😂

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lol I have known people in their 80's like that... But not quite that active in their 90's!

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heheheheh it's stories like this that get me all dreemie-eyed and wishing for adventure and treasure and hunting and generosity and fun! hehehehee

this kind of story reminds me of when I first met you hehehe i'm sitting here smiling - just thinking of our adventures so far and all that we have to come, my friend.

love you!

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I remember those times :) We are going to have plenty more too 🙌

Surprisingly some found this adventure scary!!! I never thought so!

Sending you lots of love, healing, and prayers :)

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Ah, a story within a story. I love it! This tale is rich with intriguing details, and I couldn't help but be reminded of Indiana Jones. That Grandpa is quite the brave and experienced sort! And what a fun adventure for those college boys. Thanks for sharing your story in The Ink Well, @wrestlingdesires!

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I felt I was an Indiana Jones sorta adventure
This was a fun read ;D
I wonder if the boys.. I mean, these young men are going to test the story

Nice one @wrestlingdesires ;D

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Their adventure would actually qualify as a standalone story of its own, wouldn't it?

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That was an adventure, taking such a risk for treasure. Good he followed the rules and made it out alive. Good use of the prompt with the moon casting It's shadow and the rattling snakes

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Who wouldn't want to see Rattlesnake City, as long as the citizens stay asleep!

Thank you for enjoying it :)

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