RE: Samson and Dadila of the 20th century
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Hello @newton666,
We have a strict rule in the Ink Well community: no abuse of women or girls, and no violence against women or girls. In this story, obviously, Mary suffers more than one act of violence.
I appreciate that this story took time and that you thought the plot through thoroughly. If you could manage to tell the story without including violence against women, that would be acceptable.
Also, in the fifth paragraph, there are a few words in Spanish. You probably don't want that included.
Good luck!
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I have already corrected the last paragraph and thank you very much.
Ready, change the end of Maria and the correction of the paragraph.
Thank you for that, and for observing the rules of the community. I've read the story again and commented.
Have the most peaceful day!