RE: The lady in black

Hello @titapach73,
You weave this tale with a sense of justice, tinged with mercy. There is in the end retribution for the murderous uncles and yet no bitterness in the daughter's/niece's judgment.

I would have loved to have read this in the original. It is obvious that the translation mangles your narrative style. But you have a strong sense of narrative and create a clear narrative arc.

Thank you for submitting this story to Ink Well. You obviously enjoy writing, and that makes reading a pleasure.