RE: Split Of Heart 1 || The Confusion

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A completely believable story. Humans have a tendency to want it all, your character has that dilemma. Fortunately she is young, independent and intelligent and will know how to choose, she also has the possibility to make mistakes and make amends.
Your text is written in a fluid and emotional way, @bliss11 . I liked it



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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the read

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