RE: The Dying Body Chronicles 2: Imitoken's War

Hello @warpedpoetic An all-encompassing story from beginning to end. Your characters' strengths can be seen not through their words entirely, but their actions, i.e.

The youth informed Imitoken that it was his mother who made sure he lived until that moment. The late chief had ordered his death but the queen who had the love of the chief’s house and people because of her kind deeds asked the executioner to move him to a hidden cage and make sure that no one goes there except her. Imitoken staggered at those words.
Yes, the youth said, the veiled maid that brought all your meals was my mother and your love. She had you whipped so the prison warden would not take note of you.

She turned her captivity from a weakness as having been given to an enemy camp to a strength realizing she now had the power to influence and thereby save her true love. Yes, twenty years is a long time to wait to see one's goals achieved, but her love for Imitoken gave her the perseverance she needed to survive. I believe she knew the ways of the world and knew that one day she might be able to save him.

I thoroughly enjoyed this read.