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RE: Token | The Ink Well Weekly Fiction Prompt #6: 50 Story Ideas

in The Ink Well3 months ago

It was moments later that I spotted the signature black ringlets that made up Roe's hair

This line jumped out at me, almost like the narrator looking out the window. I could see what the narrator saw. The sense of conspiracy is intense.

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