RE: Karma Came Knocking

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Karma did come knocking, didn't it? It is good that you do not let readers in the nature of Sonya's scam until late in the story. This helps to build the surprise when her deeds are discovered. You handle the revelation well. The dialogue is effective. And, you follow an informal rule of character development: characters are complex. They are not all good, or all bad. Sony has genuine feelings for one brother, and yet has scammed another.

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Yes it did. I am glad you enjoyed the read, I always try to make my stories relatable so my readers could follow easily. Thank you for your comment, I do appreciate.

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