RE: Kite / Cometa - The Ink Well Prompt #12: Childhood Summers
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This is a lovely memory--rather, memories. You have a knack for sharing details that bring a moment, or a place, to life. As pleasant as this was to read, it wasn't really a story. You need some sort conflict, some central action that demands resolution in order for this to be a story.
However, I gave you an upvote anyway because this was such a pleasant read. Thank you for thinking of the Ink Well when you write creatively. I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
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I appreciate your feedback. It is true that it is not a story as such as it requires an arc, where a character is developed. But, I wanted to go back to my memories of my summers and I couldn't avoid capturing them.
I feel that I learn a lot in your community, thank you very much for your support.
You can bet on that ;D
I actually wanted to ask you a favor, if it's not too much trouble and you can do it any time you have some free time.
There's a story I wrote not too long ago that didn't get much reception although there was one reader (@suntree) who did read it and loved it. And that made me very happy :)
https://hive.blog/hive-148441/@jadams2k18/unexpected-encounter-short-story-encuentro-inesperado-cuento-corto-eng-spa
Maybe it's too much to ask, but it doesn't matter how long it takes. It would be a pleasure if you could give your opinion on it.