RE: GoodBye

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This is a well-told, affecting story. You capture the mother's grief and personality well. Describing tears on the photo is an excellent way of showing the shared grief of mother and daughter.

There is skillful use of the prompts, so skillful that the reader is unaware that you have built a story that includes these prompts. You did a good job here!

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.



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Thank you so much for your want welcome and feedback on my story.
I am glad you liked this and yes, the prompt words were not intentional but I just had it there and I decided to make use of them.

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