RE: Diana's Mistake
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Interesting story about an important issue, the problem of anger, worthy of being named so that people understand that it needs to be addressed.
It is set out in a dialogical way, although I felt it was fragmented, perhaps more work could be done on linking the different parts of the story more smoothly,@
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Thanks for your feedback and for the time taken to read this through.