RE: Samson and Dadila of the 20th century

The characters of Mary and David have arcs that show significant development. Paralleling the narrative with the well-known story of David and Delilah is a clever technique. In the end, there is a resolution that readers find satisfying.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.

(There are significant translation issues which are difficult for you to control but they do interfere with the readability of the story. If you can get someone to read it over before publishing that might be helpful. We at Ink Well appreciate the challenge and the effort it takes to meet that challenge.)